Saturday, March 16, 2013

Triangle: The Fire that Changed America


          Triangle: the Fire that Changed America by David Von Drehle, tells the tragic story of the 146 workers that died in the Triangle shirtwaist factory fire on March 25th, 1911 and what led up to this event. David Von Drehle shows how society’s eyes were opened to the terrible conditions, and how they saw the need for reform. Drehle is a very qualified writer, who worked diligently to make this piece of history come to life for the reader. He accurately and vividly portrays the life of poor immigrants in the 1900s and the hardships that they had to deal with. The writing was very high quality and took complex turns that greatly impacted the effect that this tragedy had on the reader.
            David Von Drehle is a highly qualified writer, with a significantly educated background. According to the Time Staff Biography, Von Drehle received a B.A. from the University of Denver and a Master of Letters degree from Oxford. The Time describes Von Drehle as “an editor-at-large at TIME since 2007 that covers national stories and politics (Staff Bio).” Previously, Von Drehle worked as the senior writer for the Washington Post, having served as the paper’s assistant managing editor, national political writer, magazine staff writer and New York bureau chief.
            In preparing to write Triangle: the Fire that Changed America, David Von Drehle went to great pains to be as factually correct as possible. It was quite difficult to gather a lot of the information because many for the historical documents were lost. In an interview, Von Drehle says he was surprised at “how little of the primary material about this fire had been preserved…when I got to doing the research, I found document after document -- the coroner's investigation, the fire marshal's investigation -- had been lost (Lamb).” This must have been a great set back in his research, but he impressively kept searching by going to archives and looking for the appropriate documents. In his search, Von Drehle managed to recover several original documents, including old records of Max Steuer [a well-known attorney of the time], such as two volumes of a transcript, that is now archived in Oxford College.
What I appreciated the most about Von Drehle’s efforts was that he took the time to create the first ever complete list of everyone known to have died in the fire. Von Drehle writes that he “scour[ed] over all the sources and tripped over stray names deep in this newspaper or that oneand after eliminating all the names that seemed wrong or duplicative[he] was left…with 140 (Von Drehle 271).” The pages and pages of names in the end of the book include details about the workers – where they came from, how they lived, how they worked, and how they died. It is a sobering reminder for the reader that this event affected the lives of hundreds and should not be forgotten.
I believe that Von Drehle’s thesis begins when he writes: “The Triangle fire of March 25, 1911, was for ninety years the deadliest workplace disaster in New York historyand the most important (Von Drehle 3).” Von Drehle emphasizes how important this event is in history, and even draws some parallels to 9/11. Von Drehle continues his thesis by writing: “It [the Triangle fire] was different because it was more than just a horrific half hour; it was a crucial moment in a potent chain of eventsa chain that ultimately forced fundamental reforms from the political machinery of New York, and, after New York, the whole nation (Von Drehle 3).” The purpose of this book is to demonstrate how the Triangle catastrophe profoundly affected Tammany Hall, the New York City and State government, the federal government, the labor union movement, the socialists and the democrats.
Von Drehle’s agenda in getting people to read this book is to expose the changes that needed to be made and get the audience to draw comparisons to their lives today. He wants to “open up the horror of the Triangle fire, to gaze intently and unflinchingly at it, and to settle on the facts and their meaning (Von Drehle 5).” He wants the reader to meditate on this moment in history and then understand what it means for us, in today’s society.
This book was seemingly written with the best of intentions and I did not see any bias in Von Drehle’s writing. His compassion for the victims, his admiration for the reformers, and sincere care and passion on the subject is obvious in every word he writes. When analyzing the events, Von Drehle tries to see every angle of what happened. He does not put his own assumptions into the events, but tries to make sense and decode the confusion of documents that were available to him. Von Drehle references other historians in matters that he is not educated or well versed in. For example when writing on the subject of tenements and factory buildings he notes that “some writers have suggested that the most important advantage of the loft factories, compared to the tenement sweatshops, was the high ceilings (Von Drehle 47).” Here he is showing that this is some other writer’s point view on the subject, so that he is not just throwing around his own opinion on the matter.
The book is organized mostly in chronological order. Von Drehle starts the book with a prologue that foreshadows what will be discussed throughout. The next couple of chapters give the reader detailed background information on the social mentality, economic stability, and government involvement in society during the late 80’s and early 90’s. Then there are two chapters dedicated entirely to the heart-wrenching minutes that the fire took place. And the last chapters of the book deal the after effects such as how the public reacted, how the trials proceeded, and what reforms were made to prevent anything like this from happening again ever again.
Von Drehle’s uses of sources were extensive to say the least. The last 75 pages were specifically to expand on where he got his information and where it was available. There was a section entitled “Notes” where Von Drehle went through, chapter by chapter, and took excerpts of his quotes and put them side by side the sources that he took the information from. He then wrote a chapter entitled “Notes on Sources.” In the chapter he describes the process of how he researched and which sources he use primarily, such as the “transcribed testimony from the trial of People of the State of New York v. Isaac Harris and Max Blanck (Von Drehle 317). And finally, Von Drehle has a chapter titled: “Selected Bibliography”, that goes on for several pages expounding on different newspapers, periodicals, books, and unpublished dissertations that he used in this book.
All in all, this book was very well written. It kept my attention and was told like a story, and not like a dull historical text book. Von Drehle developed characters so well that you grew attached to them, and really felt like you connected with them. Some of the beginning was hard to get through because, although it was important, there were a lot of technical and political terms that the average reader would have a hard time understanding. The actual description of the fire was gripping and heart-breaking. The portrayals of the events and of the worker’s frantic reactions chill your bones and make you sad and angry all at once. Von Drehle really did a fantastic job at riling up the reader’s emotions. His writing plants a seed in your mind, that eats at you until you cannot sit still and must tell someone about how this tragic fire. He makes you want to ensure that something like this will never happen again.
In Conclusion, I thoroughly enjoyed Triangle: the Fire that Changed America written by David Von Drehle. Von Drehle re-examines the Triangle shirtwaist factory, and fully sheds light on the social conditions that led to it, as well as workplace and political changes that occurred because of it. This book portrayed the late 80’s and early 90’s in a new light, showing the how the poor immigrant workers struggled to live, and the wealthy dominated the economy. This book also demonstrated the rampant political corruption that took place, and how union’s struggled to form to protect the rights of the people. The audience could clearly see Von Drehle’s credibility, and unbiased attitude when reading this book. I found this to be an accurate and riveting portrayal of the Triangle shirtwaist factory fire, and I would highly recommend this book to anyone who wishes to learn more on the subject.


Works Cited
Foner, Eric. "The Progressive Era." Give Me Liberty!: An American History. New York: W.W. Norton, 2006. N. pag. Print.
Lamb, Brian. "Triangle: The Fire That Changed America." Booknotes. C-SPAN, 05 Oct. 2003. Web. 04 Mar. 2013. <http://www.booknotes.org/Watch/177888-1/David%20Von%20Drehle.aspx>.
"Staff Bios | David Von Drehle." TIME Media Kit. Time, 25 Aug. 2013. Web. 04 Mar. 2013. <http://www.timemediakit.com/us/media/bios/vondrehle.html>.
Von Drehle, David. Triangle: The Fire That Changed America. New York: Atlantic Monthly, 2003. Print.

Friday, January 18, 2013

Erebos by Ursula Poznanski

I have recently finished Erebos by Ursula Poznanski. 

Summary: "An intelligent computer game with a disturbing agenda. 

When 16-year-old Nick receives a package containing the mysterious computer game Erebos, he wonders if it will explain the behavior of his classmates, who have been secretive lately. Players of the game must obey strict rules: always play alone, never talk about the game, and never tell anyone your nickname.

Curious, Nick joins the game and quickly becomes addicted. But Erebos knows a lot about the players and begins to manipulate their lives.

When it sends Nick on a deadly assignment, he refuses and is banished from the game. Now unable to play, Nick turns to a friend for help in finding out who controls the game.

 The two set off on a dangerous mission in which the border between reality and the virtual world begins to blur."
 All in all, I enjoyed the book. The premise intrigued me, but I was skeptical at first because I've read books like this before and it always turns into "The Machine is thinking for itself. AHHH!"

But  a couple chapters into it then i was like:

As Nick started playing the game, I was easily entrapped in the mood. The game was chilling human and a few times I got the shivers.

 As the game progressed and "the messenger" gave him tasks in the REAL world, it got a bit disturbing.... *spoilers: to kill his teacher for example*

The ending I admit was a bit disappointing. Everything just came together really conveniently. Other than that I enjoyed this book, the premise was very entertaining. 3.5 stars.



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